Lonely Heart

Wow FREEZA!!.........this is VERY cool.......... the repetition works perfectly......... makes the read quite musical when read aloud......... you've obviously written before......... its timing reminds me of the old poet Christopher Marlowe........... but your point is well conveyed.......... lonely is the heart that cries alone........... well done dear poetess................ALL STARS.......... and..........WELCOME to COSMO!!.......... smiles...........T xo

Great piece Faeeza, smashing rhyme and flow too, well done!

Hi Faeeza,

Good write, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote, I love the below lines

Lonely heart and tearful eyes

all alone in pain she cries

Just when she thinks she sees the light

her world turns upside down, what a plight

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Hello Faeeza…

A heart when crying because it is only made for selfishness, solitude is not a punishment or a cause for the imbalance, you can be alone and feel accompanied. Sincere tears are always shed by an alien heart, a lonely heart can cry of sadness, but also happiness.

The poem is very well built and relates to perfection the anguish of a heart that resists the solitude.

A greeting.