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Look in the mirror...

Look in the mirror...

You gaze upon the mirror
And see me as a faint mirage
But you cannot touch...taste  or hear
In a different world I bleed upon the stones
The candles flicker as I fade...
Watch me for the last time
My love for you is gone ..to the wind
Chance upon chance ...my world could not take
As the wax melts ...so does my soul
Till nothing remains ..but the wick which kept us together
An invisible cord melted beyond repair
You crushed my love.....broke my heart
"NOW!"....look in the mirror...
And remember my face...
As the flames die...
So does my love..
And this Image...will never be yours!
Let the candle of our dreams ....die ..

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Stephen Weyant

i agree with cherie

perfectly done!

~~As the wax melts ...so does my soul
 Till nothing remains ..but the wick which kept us together

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Tina Moore

Thanks Stephen  -can you see me in the mirror lol   its faint but im in the background     Tina x

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Stephen Weyant

i did!
a mesmerizing photo! theres an elegant beauty emitted!

i sense some vengeance towards the end, but also release, something long waited for perhaps!

much enjoyed!

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Tina Moore

Thank you Stephen - old wounds do heal  but leave a good write behind lol   Tina x

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Tina Moore,

This is an excellent write, I love the below quoted lines, My nomination

  • You gaze upon the mirror
  • And see me as a faint mirage
  • But you cannot touch...taste  or hear
  • In a different world I bleed upon the stones

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Tina Moore

Gaze and see what you can find within yourself....

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