Looking

Standing on a western shore,
Looking on,
He sees the edge of the world,
All angry,
Trapped in the sand,
Light fading slowly,
Sun falling,
Reflections of memories in the ocean's waves,
A foreigner,
Remembers an impossible past,
In whose heart,
Lives his past,
In a distant light and a long ago time,
A home he will,
Never see again.
Copyright © 2016 Ronald J Chapman All Rights Reserved.
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Comments
Wow nice piece Ron trully incouraging and captivating piec with heart wrenching experience that most don't get to experience witch is an great touch to such a lovely worded poem thank you for sharing also I didn't get to watch vid YouTube isn't allowed at school
Dameon, Thank you for the wonderful comment and review. I'm the foreigner missing Korea.
-Ron
Hope yeah get to visit there soon man you sure do deserve it
Dameon, thank you.
Hey Ron a wonderful write, I could feel your heart in each line .cheers rock
Hardrocklover, Thank you for the great comment. :)
-Ron
A great write - a great summary of detail
Mark Paul van der Merwe,
Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed reading my poem "Looking."
-Ron