Poem -
losing faith
- Christ you bastard
- Why make life hard?
- Losing faith in you
- Don't know what to do
- The devil won't let Me be free.
- Why can't you see me, hear me, help me?
- No one want to hear mu fucking fears!
- We're told lifes this and lived that.Ā
- Wish the bible had some facts!
- no more control or dictate
- I'll choose my own fate!
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Comments
...Which is somethingĀ that takes true courage.
In some of your poetry you use bullet points to punctuate each line...is this a stylistic choice, or is there a deeper intention behind it?
Your poetry deals with a number of dark and painful subjects; but there's a strident confidence in the writing which is indicative of a strong and independent mind.
Powerful.
J ;)