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Lost in the Dance

Lost in the Dance

I'm here again

among the flutes

in the whistle of kavita;

upon the heavenbound melody

of Great Dravidia

 
Soul moves our limbs

as we flow with the green current

of Nilambur's teaks;

plucked like lutes,

struck as the drum beats

 
This is the south

This is our vital blood

rhythmed by our bhakti feet,

as if we were drunk

But our mind is sound,

our hearts in tune

Its a different kind of funk

and it impacts along

the fertile ground

under a tropical moon

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Katina Woodruff...

I could hear the beating of a drum. There are people everywhere. 

Favorite Part: 

Soul moves our limbs
as we flow with the green current
of Nilambor's teaks;
plucked like lutes,
struck as the drum beats

I'm going to do a little research to understand your poem better. Then, I'll return to write you a better review. Thank you for sharing it. 

Happy Holidays from Newark, Ohio 
 

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al Bikaadi

Thank you for confirming that it evoked a vivid impression. So glad you enjoyed it. Look forward to finding out what you discover as you dig deeper. ❤

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