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LOST IN MUSIC

LOST IN MUSIC

lost in music you danced all night long
I laughed at your moves ,you wiggled to the songs
Hip-hop and break-dance you took to the floor
like an 80's drop-out ,but the crowd cheered for more
Slapping your thigh like a cowboy was shot
Feeling your body the "look" was not hot
Head -banging to any tune with a beat
But going too low,you connect with your feet
You did the splits ,never saw that before
The look of surprise when you froze on the floor
They carried you off in so much pain
You tried to be young ,never would tame
Now you take it easy when out at the bar
We laugh at the memory dance king and his scar
Slow dancing is all you are up for today
Arms wrapped around me is the best dance i say!
 

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Matthew Poetic

Awesome dance relationship poem! I could picture every move! GREAT POEM!

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Tina Moore

lol i enjoyed writing this matthew   thanx   tina x

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Susan O'Reilly

Hi tina great fun poem and he sounds like me and I'm also not able for it anymore couldn't do the splits though enjoyed x

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Tina Moore

thanx susan  would have loved to have seen you doing all that  LOL   tina x

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Susan O'Reilly

Tina I still the headbanging my hair was made for it lol x

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Tina Moore

lol we are still young susan keep the hair moving lol   tina x

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Nancy Mcgowin

Tina- This is so fun, and clever, I really like it!!!

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Tina Moore

aww thanx nancy  glad you liked it  tina  x

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Sayed Thangal

merry music that make the readers happy, special form of writing from you,

sayed

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Tina Moore

thank you sayed i hope it cheered you and others up    tina x

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Morris Holland ...

cute... I remember my break dancing days lol... Thanks for taking me back down memory lane

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Tina Moore

thanx morris i can just picture you break dancing  lol glad i gave you a nice memory  tina x

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