Lost Soul
She seeks solace in clutching his ring
The silence is more than deafening
They shared so much in this home
Now she faces the future alone
She plays their song to break the peace
The pain of sorrow will not cease
Memories of joy flood back with the tune
Tears are now her companion in the gloom
To lose her reason to live in this way
Torments her each and every day
Friends and family have tried their best
To help her through this toughest test
But she has a broken heart
Dwelling on the moment their souls did part
Losing her lover to the cruelty of fate
She has no choice but to wait
For the anguish not to sap her strength
She would go to any length
To feel his arms around her again
To see his smile and happy refrain
For them to bless this house as they had
For a release from despair she would be glad
But now she crumples to the floor with grief
Praying for there to be some relief
The solitude overwhelms her once more
She will never recover, of that she is sure.
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Hi Richard!!......I've never read you before (my loss).........the picture you chose added beautifully to the emotion conveyed here...........loved the rhyme scheme..........and the depth of understanding your subject matter made this (for me) a VERY compelling...........and lovingly delivered piece!!.........well done friend............smiles..........T xx
Thank you very much for your kind words Tony.
well thought out and touching can picture the scene in my head moving wordsxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxsteph
Thank you ! x
Thank you Richard. You have a new follower.
You too ! Enjoy your work . :)
This poem reminds me of someone I know. Wonderful outline and absolutely capturing emotion. Great job!
Thanks ! I enjoy reading your work. Keep expressing yourself ! :)
Very emotional and realistic in this world we live in. It's a shame this happens daily, but life must always go on. Good work...
It was written from the heart. :)
So sad. My first thought was "oh god I hope not."...your words are very moving. I was able to apply it to one of my realities...that's how I imagined it must be for her and worse. It's very very good.
X
Awww...Richard....
Such a wonderful poem, story....sad as well. The vision of this relationship, her feelings. Her isolation, pain and heartbreak....reflects so much of my writing as well...The imagery is amazing...
Thank you angel for sharing your inspiration :)
Have a great life and writing journey :)
Keep smiling ;)
Brenda...aka Giggles the Poet
P.S....thank you for your kind review of my work....I greatly appreciate it :)
Giggles :)
Thank you so much for your kind words on my work ! :)