Lost Sun
I woke up again in the
dark cold room of mine,
The sun never shine upon me.
Raging rain left my wounds
unhealed..
Never felt raindrops so painful
on my wounded soul..
No tears left to run down
my face, to console this pain.
As, all the shine lost along
with the dead sun of mine...
Each seconds spend like centuries,
awaiting nothing.
Once again got captivated in
my own body,
same rancid air surrounded
me ,day and night..
Loneliness ,was my only faithful
companion ,stayed true like
my shadow..
comforted me with his presence
as ever...
The hope of tomorrow never again..
All washed away in the dance
of the cold rain this morning..
Felt today as the coldest day in my life,
Ur music brought untold bliss
in my dry life...
still inspiring me to open
my eyes in this cold dark day..
But unexplained numbness begin
to surround my body and thoughts
unable to hold these
moments of separation..
I rolled back again in this big
wheel of life ,millions of years
back, where i commenced
my journey, in search of u...
Felt feeble ,lost in the lost
gleam of my beautiful sun.
loosing my hope in eternity
never ever having the hope
to wake again
Incompleteness pierced my soul
splitting it into several pieces..
lying cold in this morning,
never having the hope to awake
again to bask in the warmth
from the glorious sun of mine....
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Piusha Singh,
Touching lines, thanks for sharing the agony and grief, Good write
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Oh Thnxxx Dear Cherie for your kind and honest review.Always I got drawn by these expressions of solitude and depression.My pen move faster when writing these...Lol..
Sorry I m travelling, thnxxx Williams ji..For your kind support.
I beg your pardon williamsji ,for the typing jigsaw.I m travelling and my touchscreen of android acting funny.Hope you will understand.I'm really sorry for that.
A sad story. Words spread out like the feelings within this. So much going on and so little ahead as so it seems. Good job, The Shaker
Dear Piusha Singh,
My applause and my Congrats on your winning nomination of your " Lost Sun ". Good Luck
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
veryy sad write but truely expressed the immense feelings of your heart..:) Loved each phrase..
"the wheel of life..hope of tomorrow never again..never having the hope to awake.."
Loved it..!!
Keep writing
Love
Surabhi
Thnxxx sweet Surabhi for your lovely review,
Love yaa
You are such a talent miss..So glad you got the nom for this xx :)
Thnxxx dear Carey for your kind review.
Love
piusha..
You write so well , this one is amazing
Love it
Maddison
Thnxxx Maddison for your kind words.
Love
piusha.
I'am so glad that this is just poetry .because i would have to write you and cheer you
up.You poem is so touching with drama.
That gives the reader a exploding inner feeling loniness know one should ever feel.
But it stops the reader and hopes that he or she would never ever feel what you
write about in your poem. Lady this is deep god this is real good drama stuff.
100% for your efforts as a poetry writer
The xx Anthony for your kind review.And glad to know that you got the feel of my poem.
Thnxxx Anthony.