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Lost Thoughts

Leaning on simplicity
The little words were lost
In the tall tales of being grown
In the underbrush of routine
Yet no ceremony to separate
I sit here with vast confusion
I only stopped to contemplate
The reason my watch had stopped
Found my train of thought
Totally lost in watching someone get
a hot dog
I felt hunger as never before
So of course the watch was not set
I gained a hot dog
and
When it started to rain
I went home

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Tony Owen

Hi Dagnis. An interesting and thought provoking write. Thank you for sharing.

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Dagnis Teernin

I am glad you read and liked my work.. Thank you for taking the time
to comment.
Dagnis

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Nine Eleven

Sometimes, it's the simple things in life that give us inspiration 

Welcome to cosmo. 

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Dagnis Teernin

Simplicity is like joy. Thank you for your comment.
Dagnis

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Marion

I too like this work and it's beautiful simplicity and flow of thought ?

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Dagnis Teernin

Thank you Marion. It is a pleasure to have fellow writers enjoy 
something I did.. again.. Thank you .
Dagnis

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