Poem -
Love In The Fast Lane ....
We rushed it ...fast and furious
Ruined each others souls before it began
Spun around that corner chancing on two wheels..
Drunk and disorderly on lust ...we crashed,,,
Into that brick wall ...dead end of nothing left behind
Concussion in the aftermath of a rushed dream
No time to savor and appease our souls
Just destruction.....cold...bitter ...icy love
Time does tell !
Love never dies ?
We killed this one !
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Comments
TINA
YOUR WORK IS AN INSPIRATION,YOU WRITE WITH GREAT DEPTH.TINA I CAN ONLY HOPE TO LEARN FROM YOU BUT MEANTIME KEEP THE POEM'S COMING,AS IV ALL READY READ THEM OVER AND OVER AGAIN XX
Suzanne i'm really flattered with your beautiful comment :) I guess as in your work too ..we have both felt the heartache and downside of living but enlightening pieces come into it too and both sets can be a blessing writing wise ..you keep up yours too as it helps ... tina xx And thank you my friend!
Nice write Tina, liked the two comparisons, some great lines, enjoyed! A vote from me:)
Thanks for the nom rachel and sometimes love feels like a car crash lol I survived to drive another though lol
Tina x