Poem -
Love Like Liquid
As I overlook these
Bellowing mountains
Overlooking bellowing
Valleys, scorching deserts
Bellowing badlands
I've but one thought
In my mind
How to give her
More of my time
As all of my unyielding attention
Is drawn towards the task
Of keeping her close
Shes just a bad drug
And I tend to overdose
But I digress
And even more so I boast
Her love is transparent
Her affections a ghost
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Comments
Maybe I should stop mentoring you...you are starting to sound like me! Ha! I love this piece my mysterious apprentice lol, but the picture leaves me with questions...is that I knife in her hand?! Hmm now the poem is drawing questions, how curious at any rate you're doing great 5/5
The Onlooker
Teach! It's awesome to see you on my page checking these out in your free time! And yes, I learn from the best, one day I hope to collab. And no on the mentoring thing! You are such as an awesome teacher and I learn so much. Thanks Curious!
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Also I'll leave the mystery for others to decipher ;)
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Awesome write Anonymo, cool picture and love is a drug so many addicted to enjoyed the mysterious ending of your write really inspiring stuff. Well done my respect to you.
A compliment of the highest degree, thanks Devon I hope I continue to inspire!
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Hi anonymo what a lovely write . Much passion poured over this page . I can feel it line by line .cheers hrl :)
Thanks HRL I really appreciate the compliment!
Cheers :)
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Thank you everyone!
MUSE is like water in your hand.
Thanks! Not sure I understand though lol
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