LOVE STAINED PLANS
I WILL ROT AS YOU ROT
Love stained plans prove liar lips from mouths no longer able to speak ...
Two halves laying 6 feet apart a hole eternally unable to be made whole...
Words spoken in hope and laughter replay over and over now just to tease ...
My night unshining left me unprepared broken and without armour...
I amĀ the promises you left behind and you are my world that ended...
How can I breath without your breath...
How can I smile with stolen happiness...
How can I move forward when i cant have you back...
I will live my life the way we planned...
TOGETHER...
I will go where you go...
I will do as you do...
I will feel as you feel...
AND SO...
I will go nowhere...
I will rot as you rot...
I won't feel as you feel...
I won't lie as you lay...
I will return the virtue to our lying lips...
AND...
I will love you always and forever...
RIPBBB
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This is very tragic, Raechel. The reader doesnāt know that to say.Ā
Perhapsā¦ sympathy for the Poet.
Good to see you at Cosmo again.Ā
Bernadete
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Hi Raechel, I noticed (just after I posted my comment) the words: Ā RIP . Itās not just a poem, this is real, I am sorry for your loss.
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Noone as sorry as I but I do thank you for taking the time to read my write and IĀ appreciate your kind words. For me life has turned into a tragic poem but there aren't words enough to describe the emotions to what this is that I feel anymore....words dont hold as much meaning memories dont seem as important living has lost its value and life is no longer realš¤
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Your write is haunting. I understand completely the last 4 lines in the comment above to Bernadete. There is life... there is death... and there is a third state of being that is never spoken of because there are no words to describe it. Hugs x
Eternity compared to a life time in a vast universe instead of just one confining planet once held so much excitement and wonder I now realize just how lonely infinity could be š¤
So much emotion and incredibly relatable, whether it's loss through death or not, it's so very painful whether it's the loss of love or someone we have loved.Ā Kudos š¹Ā
Really sad and beautiful, and smart. Great writing Raechel! M.Ā