LOVEDUST
I don’t need much!
A little sip of wine,
A ray of sunshine
And a sprinkle of lovedust.
The rest is just greed,
I enjoy while it lasts.
The wine finishes
The sun goes away
What lingers in the air
Is the feeling of lovedust.
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Comments
I love the line "the rest I can say is just greed." It's the fulcrum around which your poem turns if that is even the correct use of fulcrum. But hey who cares. I guess you know what I mean. And I guess you are saying that 2 out of the three flatter to deceive but not lovedust and what a lovely word to choose. The sprinkle stays around. Love it.
Sensual write….
You can beat an egg and a drum and a carpet .. but you just can't beat a good bit of lovedust .. excellent .. it sparkles, a proper little gem .. Neville
Just stunning. A poem thats truly 'living'
in the moment...with gratitude. pinned x
Marion, good to have you back!!! See, you go for a week and are already missed. I was thinking of you but didn’t want to invade your privacy. This poem was written because of you. Last time I sent you a hug and “lovedust”. Then this poem was born. Thanks goodness you like & appreciate it.
Sending you a huge sprinkle of lovedust.