Poem -

Love...pain...decisions

author
Clayton Evans

Sighs* I'm so lonely...I hate this...I'm in pain...i need someone...I want her...but she isn't here...I need comfort...but comfort won't come...I need some help...but help won't arrive...maybe I should give up...or maybe I should try...just let me decide...please let me decide...

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Abandoned Faded Lonely Relationship Sad
Poetry Genre: 
Narrative Tragedy
Topic: 
Love
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David Hopkins

Very nice.Β  It's like Pink says in her song: "You gotta get up and try."

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Ella

I really loved this!Β 

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