Poem -
Lover's Lament
Barbed wire garrotes
An ignorant heart
Sanguine tipped barbs
Pierce like a dart
Lies flow from
Saccharine sweet lips
Dark, arduous
Like molasses drips
Come lover
Tell me more
Bittersweet so
Worth living for
A simpleton has
No reason to beware
Surrender keen
In a passionate affair
Kept imbalanced
A distorted scale
Too proud to admit
Loveβs epic fail
Like all dreams of
White picket fences
Chaos ensued
Makes ruin of defenses
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Comments
I've been spamming your comment section today lol! (I love it). Passionately beautiful with deep sorrow of heart-wrenching heartbreak laced throughout. I'm in aweπππ½
Well I do love fried spam and eggs....thanks for keeping watch I appreciate your vigilance.
Hahaha lol that was a clever one, you cracked me upπ
Awww it's my pleasure, Im a fan! πΒ
Guess I'll keep 'frying' the comment sectionπ
(mine is terrible I knowπ)
I'm happy to oblige everyone needs a good chortle!Β
Haha aww very true my friend! Laughter is the 'life' in lifeπ
:)
Wow lisa you're on a tremendous roll.Β Profusely hitting home excellent write after write.
I have been editing older stuff and it seems to be flowing pretty nicely, thank you Simon.
Hey DARKLY!!.......I agree with all of the above....... You are on a tremendous roll>>>.... Keep 'em coming dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!!.......T xo π§β΄β€
Thank you much Tony for stopping by to leave a bit-o-love!