Poem - 24 August 2017, 14:25 Lukewarm Sambit Kumar Pradhan A lazy morning wrapped in the day's paper, Dampened a smidge by the chilly grey mist, A lukewarm dream you kissed me awake of. Like 2 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 812 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Love Dream Mist Morning Playful Poetry Genre: Freestyle Narrative Romance Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
Sambit Kumar Pradhan24 August 2017, 15:51 Shukriya so much Jason!! :) There should be a 'Brevity' tag in the tag list here. It'd be a treat for poetry enthusiasts with shorter attention spans or reading patience. Reply
Tony Taylor24 August 2017, 15:30 I absolutely LOVE that third & final line SAMBIT!!......stellar job brother poet!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?✳✴☀ Reply
Sambit Kumar Pradhan24 August 2017, 15:52 You are too kind Tony! Shukriya so very much wishing you likewise! :) Reply
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A crystalline picture of a near-perfect moment.
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Shukriya so much Jason!! :)
There should be a 'Brevity' tag in the tag list here. It'd be a treat for poetry enthusiasts with shorter attention spans or reading patience.
I absolutely LOVE that third & final line SAMBIT!!......stellar job brother poet!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?✳✴☀
You are too kind Tony!
Shukriya so very much wishing you likewise! :)