Lust

Dear Curtis 'mamma j...

Since long time, I had the chance to comment on your poem. This is good, my applause, my vote, I like the below lines, the way these have been composed,

• Wings spread and pulsing
• Your cries of bliss an aria
• How it drives me like a sudden gust 
• Fingers offered to your mouth
• How hungry you devour   
• Speckled areolas dripping honey
• Nipples pressed together   
• How the sweet, cling to the sugar
• And yet it remains,                  
• So hard to comprehend
• But never wishing to appease
• This lust phenomenon

Write and rewrite. Like any other writing genre, erotic poetry requires editing and thoughtful rewrites. Remember; write the first draft with passion, the second draft with logic. Erotica, once written exclusively by authors who remained anonymous, has gone in and as mainstream writers. Erotic novels, movies are now common, Erotic thoughts are not sinful deeds, it is part of our daily life, We have to accept it and not to reject pr suppress. While writing an erotic novel takes weeks or months, writing an erotic poem is a lot of fun and only takes minutes in most cases. Good luck dear Poet Curtis

Love, regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Heya my brother across the sea, this is passionately erotically written, within such taste, like dripping honey, a very sensual write, i loved it well done bro love to you your sis down under nardine xoxo

Hey Mamma Jamma!!..........this is one of the best pieces I've ever read from you brother..........the consistency in your intent is impeccable..........the desirous nature of this write is rings true.............and the delivery is drop-dead gorgeous...........miss you............hope the painting is going well..........you should be most proud of this piece man............near perfection bro................ttyl...............T  xx

Curtis Longstreet, where are ya~ miss your face my brother from another mother xoxo