Poem -
MacDonald's
I'm sick of writing these stupid poems.
Tired from not being good enough.
Talk about loathing, talk about love.
I never thought life would bend me over
Has it does.
I could have controlled fear.
Could have put aside logic more to feel.
Starting to go to bed earlier every night.
Tomorrow I'll get MacDonald's.
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Comments
Such a serious piece, yet most amusing just as we should all do, look on that one ray of light, I absolutely love to bits your poetry soul dear Rory, you should always write what's in your heart. 🌹
Typo? Has it does. As it does? You know me, just keeping you on your toes 🤣
So cheeky, not my best work, you'll understand. I think I'm thinking with my stomach on this one
I said Wonderful work, I love it when it speaks for from the heart even when the destination finale is MC Donald's lol 🌹 it's life and poetry
You certainly have a unique style & a passion when it comes to poetry .. and I admire the way you express yourself .. I reckon you are one of them pen it, post it and forget it kinda guys .. Neville
There are one's closer to my heart than others, it's true
Aw shit... love the ironic hopelessness
the macdonalds line?... icing on the cake x