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Sandra Day

Short but to the point. Its true- perfect. 

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Shirley Pourbaba

Thank you, William, Sandra and Susan, love getting your input, seems like its fun to HAIKU.

Will try to come up  with more.

Glide on love 

Shirley

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Shirley Pourbaba

Hi William,

Thanks for taking the time to familiarize me with Haiku, i truly appreciate all your love for poetry, you are an volcano of inspiration melting away the roughs of the heart.

God bless

Shirley

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Meenakshi Narayanan

darling i am your fan now. such surety in two lines . it touched my heart . blew my mind.. 

here are some lines for you

o dear shirley

the more you write

the more i grow

:)

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Shirley Pourbaba

Okay Meenakshi, here is one for you.

O Dear Meenakshi

I am a slave to all gravity

The more i know the less clarity

Stay with the heart, your rhyme, your poetry

She is your truth, not a myth, but a reality.

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Surabhi Saxena

Hey Shirley..

few lines..revealing a deeper meaning..!
Liked it..!

keep going..
Regards
Surabhi

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Meenakshi Narayanan

i have madly fallen in love with this one. shirley i have written a poem named evolution.. it is also of two lines. i mentioned you in my comment.. thats dedicated to you, you must read it :)

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Shirley Pourbaba

Dearest Meeakshi

I am very humbled as i read your very kind comments as well as your very deep and gorgeous poem, nothing is more inspiring than inspiring others, for it is then where a dance of beauty begins to open our heart to a world where love is the only vision spoken and the only language that will spread her wings through out every field, every dried land, every garden in pain, and every lost and forgotten man and woman.

Many kind regards 

Shirley    

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