Mad Mind
I never choose
Stuck in a limbo where I only loose
A part of my blues
Content to contend with this
Comfortable ruse
It's making me numb
I'm drinking the poison that's
Making me dumb
Don't try to judge
You hypocrites hate me
Well I hate to love
I'm making it real
My deepest of fears
And secrets revealed
The stuff that won't heal
Watch as I'm burning
And how does it feel
I bet that it's nice
You'd leave me to die
Never think twice
I hope I suffice
You're hungry for blood
Put me on ice
I made my mistakes
For those that I love
I do what it takes
Including myself
Loving my soul
Destroying my health
So maybe I lied
I'm hurting myself
But mostly I tried
If I don't survive
Tell them I suffered
And gradually died
Life is a game
Live how I'm living
And you'll think the same
The game isn't fair
Some are born winning
And others despair
It's making me sick
Humans are god
But only for kicks
We don't even know
The power we wield
With little control
I've always been small
Much too quiet
To issue the calls
I wish that were all
I think I'm a rarity
Ready to fall
Why would I lie
The struggle is endless
I'm ready to die
A joke when I'm young
Exposed to the madness
And void of the fun
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I really liked this!Β
Thank you, it means a lot!Β
C.O
I really like this too, Curious Onlooker, liking how each line stands up and speaks, almost like 'the wave' at a sporting event, a beautifully orchestrated composition, very well done, cheers poet
Thanks Chris I actually really labored to give the poem that effect. Even now there are many crumpled up papers near me as I struggled to get it right haha but I appreciate that you noticed that. Almost like different witnesses testifying in a case, my character is on trial. Thanks much brother poet
Curious
Hey Brother!!..... you're no rarity (as this poem would have us believe)...... you're just another poet..... another onlooker in this game we call 'LIFE"!!..... it's just that your words penetrate..... your bartender isΒ better..... giving you that unfair advantage...,. of shining a bit brighter..... summoning the masses to your gentle feet..,,, where you proceed to slay them with the kindness of loving generosity!!......I hate you!!...... must be that "Mad Mind" of yours amplifying the truth up in here!!.......ALL Damn STARS!!...... smiles...... well done my friend..,,..LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?β³β΄ββ₯β₯??
That was a 5 star comment haha I almost fell out of my seat.Β Thank you so much my friend for words that instantly put a smile on my face. Give that bartender more tips! Lol you know I've always been a big fan of "truth" whether it's about myself, the world or anything else. Amplification is inevitable. I'm just glad that when I put it into words people actually like it and not hate me...or maybe they do haha thanks again brother and much Love.
Curious
The messages in this are wonderful, like
Β "The game isn't fair
Some are born winning
And others despair"Β
is a perfect representation of how things are all over the world.Β
Also, the seemingly random rhyme scheme jumps play so well into the name of the piece.Β
Hats of to you bro and Much love too
- Never Unknown