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MAN, I HOPE YOU'RE RIGHT

MAN, I HOPE YOU'RE RIGHT

People encourage the sins of man...

For it isn't their deed that they shall fall...

They will encourage your soul to fail...

The lies of the world the seeing person's downfall...

​​​​​​People who have ears to hear...

To some it's a blessing to some a curse...

God didn't forgive Lucifer His brother...

​​​​​​So certain He will save you in battle...

Standing at the judgment seat...

Man, I hope you're right...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Dean Kuch

I believe in erring on the side of caution, sparrowsong.
Yes, I am a born again Christian having dedicated my life to Christ at the ripe old age of 16.
Since that time, I have back slid more than once and reaffirmed my dedication.
If I'm wrong, and there is nothing beyond the veil of death's doorway besides rot and decay, what have I lost to have labeled myself a believer?
But if God and His promises ARE real (and I believe they are), but I choose NOT to believe and I'm wrong, well...
...I hear Hell's awfully damned hot, LOL.
Nicely penned, dear poet.
~Dean  :}

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sparrowsong

Hello Dean...

We can see Him in everything if we just look...

He has answered many of my Prayers...

Things no one knew I prayed and no hands touched me...

I have to put Him first in my life because, everyday I need Him...

He has kept me from harm when people tried to kill me...

​​​​​The Angels have worked overtime to keep me safe...

I can't forget that and I can't forget all He has done for me and continues to work in my life...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Dean Kuch

My pleasure, sparrowsong.
He's saved my life on more than one occasion.
I may elaborate one day.
God bless,
~Dean

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Richard Waters

A write of reflection intent on providing deep soul-searching, which can only benefit spiritual reasoning.
Thanks for sharing.
:)

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KIERAN1369

A strong and powerful piece very well expressed and written

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sparrowsong

Hello Romeo...

Definitely!

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Best wishes and blessings!

Hugs! :)

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Kieran...

Thank you very much for your kind comment!

Glad you enjoyed!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Kieran...

P.S. Thank you for wonderful support!

Hugs again... 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Cherie...

There's lots of things I also don't understand about the humankind...

The risks and chances in our lives and for our soul...

It's like a daily game of Russian Roulette and we are always hoping that He'll let us in...

Knowing He's watching everything we do and break His heart still...

But, what's worse...

What we do to Him or What we do to ourselves that He'll judge?

Thank you for your comment and support!

Love n Hugs

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Wayne...

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello Leah...

Glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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sparrowsong

Hello .Barto...

He loves Math and Mystery...

But, His overall messages are very clear...

When He says there's only one way into Heaven...

That's quite direct...

When He says Repent, Turn away from your sins and Sin no more...

That's very direct too...

People talk about crime and no one has been treated more badly than He...

Yet, people have some sense of entitlement...

​​​​​​They use His forgiveness as a shield and slapping Him in the face at the same time...

Believing they're saved...

WOW!

Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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