Poem -
blast from the past
she was a blast from the past
although it didn't last
she made me laugh
with her one liners
and her goofy ways
and the way she used word play
but hey
it wasn't to be
just another maybe
so i moved on
to the next one
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Hi Jeff, Interesting love story. Enjoyed reading it most especially the rhyme. Nice one
Lots of love
Thanks for reading. It was a relationship years ago it only lasted a few months lol
Jeff, this is a well written compelling poem, reads really well, the rhymes are so stirring and felt over-whelming (in a good way) at times; you extended them further than the reader is use to, and that is a good thing, most poems on here fall into a predictable style pattern, this one not so much; with your extended rhymes and description....I enjoyed the whimsical tone as well, you do some 'unusual' things with a poem,my friend, but it still reads like a charm....truly enjoyable experience, welcome to the community, cheers
Thanks so much for the review really glad you enjoyed my work and thanks for the warm welcome
awesome wield of the pen!
Thanks so much for reading and even more for reviewing