Poem -

blast from the past

she was a blast from the past 

although it didn't last 

she made me laugh 

with her one liners

and her goofy ways

and the way she used word play 

but hey 

it wasn't to be 

just another maybe 

so i moved on

to the next one 

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Rose Sho

Hi Jeff,  Interesting love story. Enjoyed reading it most especially the rhyme. Nice one

Lots of love

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J A Overton

Thanks for reading. It was a relationship years ago it only lasted a few months lol 

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Christopher Correia

Jeff, this is a well written compelling poem, reads really well, the rhymes are so stirring and felt over-whelming (in a good way) at times; you extended them further than the reader is use to, and that is a good thing, most poems on here fall into a predictable style pattern, this one not so much; with your extended rhymes and description....I enjoyed the whimsical tone as well, you do some 'unusual' things with a poem,my friend, but it still reads like a charm....truly enjoyable experience, welcome to the community, cheers 

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J A Overton

Thanks so much for the review really glad you enjoyed my work and thanks for the warm welcome

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J A Overton

Thanks so much for reading and even more for reviewing 

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