".......**ME AN ALIEN**......."
![".......**ME AN ALIEN**......."](https://cosmofunnel.com/sites/default/files/styles/full/public/2014-05/4476033398.jpg?itok=m5fC_-r1 "".......**ME AN ALIEN**......."")
Me an alien in generated with an
exotic torso amid a green-eyed,
avid robed crowd, vain prospect ,
exhilarating the atrophy of shoot.
Birth and death my companions,
in the star cluster ,Pleiades ,my
blue,dazzling ,array of seven stars,
my celestial roost of inception.
Tipsy in transient mirth of cycle.
Fascinated in beguile ,to incarnate
in the abyss of beautiful blue marble.
Abandoning my scintillant beau .
Exuded the astral twill ,plunged
into the adventure of infernal
scheme,full of exhausting surprises.
Navigated into the world of insanity.
Grave genesis howled, violating
affiance of an aeon to millions.
Enslaved in this noxious relics,jovial
in reminiscence of your nostalgic consort .
Your infrequent visits strayed as
flashes ,debilitated in this sequence,
but mellowed into a platonic entity,
As ablaze, impending a buoyant exemption ....
BY
PIUSHA
P.S:My poems will be incomplete without Estas Tonne's music.As I listen to him, always enter into a trance state, flaring up my writings.....
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such freestyle. such mystery. such movement:
"Exuded the astral twill ,plunged
into the adventure of infernal
scheme, full of exhausting surprises.
Navigated into the world of insanity.
Grave genesis howled, violating
affiance of an aeon to millions."
Great capture!
Dear Glenn, this poem is a reflection about my life on earth...I know people will laugh at me..But always I am a stranger amidst the crowd.A feel that my home is not here...and a memory of lost loved ones...many spiritual incidences, seeing souls...probably I may be having borderline schizo...but People can't understand...and it's on. .but I am glad at least you commented on my poem
I am honored..by your kind remarks...
love
Piusha
My reflection will be incomplete without Estas music as his music inspires me in most of my writing...celestial..
Creditable part of a valour brain.
Great love with regard,
Ravindra Kumar
Thnxxx dear Ravindra ji your remarks are so precious...
Love
Piusha,
This is exceptionally good, I love the below lines. Voted and nominated.
Dear William my deep gratitude for nominating and saying such good verses...I love the black and white ending in your poem very meaningful, and it's true...I understood what you are saying...And this one is very very close to my heart..
Love
Piusha
I can only hope you enter that state Piusha...over and over... as your words do transform into thy language... so mesmerizing..its out of this world!!!
You are an alien....
And so am I...
My vote for this piece
Sent from your sky!!! xxx
Thnxxx enchantress for your kind remarks and nomination...
Love yaa
Xoxoxo
PIusha really u r in an alien state of mind... EXCELLENT
Yes. ..prem you are right...ME AN ALIEN...you got it right...
Hats off to you... great combination of lyrics and music. .love it
Thnxxx dear prem, for such kind remarks..you are an excellent photographer ...
Love
A great write..I can relate to you as well...!! I too feel like this many a times...:D Loved the music..:) *5 stars..and a new collection to my fav gallery..!
Keep writing!
Love
A fine piece of writing Piusha, it`s very well written and well thought through. A very enjoyable read sweety. I quite often feel like I`m the Alien on this planet. Even when I`m surrounded by others I can still feel very alone and desolate. You are a talented and beautiful soul. Well done. Love G xx