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Meditate

Laying on the grass trying to relax,
Looking upwards, at the clouds,
One looks like an angel wings spread out,
Slowly that cloud dissipates,
Now a fish appears and swims away,
As I lay there time passes by,
A tap on the shoulder,
I turn around nobody's there,
Noticing its getting dark,
How long did I lay there?
It seemed like only five minutes,
Yet the dark is here,
Who or what warned me, 
Was I dreaming?
Thinking on all this I walk away.

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Tamara

Wow this is very good, I enjoyed this! It's very catchy.

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Gwendoline

I loved reading this. Mediation can submerge us and time can suddenly sweep by. Beautifully described 

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Tracy Mcfayden

My mum says when I'm totally relaxed I see shapes in clouds but also in trees I like to think they are there but it's called paredolia still it helps me so I don't care what it is.

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Gwendoline

More power to you I say Tracy. Like you finely put, who cares, if it feels good :) 

I love meditation and visualisation and I would say you have the skill in spades x

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Tracy Mcfayden

My favourite meditation is been in a meadow sat under a tree 😀

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Gwendoline

Aah yes I love meditation by a tree. Great for grounding :) 

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Tony Taylor

Lovely!!.....It is great subject matter that you share here so poetically......Thank you for sharing this Tracy.......Meditation is food for the soul!!......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )

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Tracy Mcfayden

Meditation helps to chase all the days worries and trials away also helps you to sleep. So pleased so many like this poem. Thank you

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Neville

.. I practice zazen seated meditation daily, sometimes when time allows twice a day .. therefore, when the title caught my eye I just had to take a peek inside .. and what I found here was quite lovely .. Neville :)

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Tracy Mcfayden

Thank you so much. I often just sit on my sofa and imagine waves crashing on the shore myself walking along sometimes I can sit like it for ages but afterwards I am so relaxed x

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Neville

Good to hear and you really are most welcome Tracy :) x

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