Look at me
Look into my eyes
sing to me
sweet-sounding
pleasant soft, liquidity, silvery, soothing,
Look at me
Look into my eyes
sing in the voice so mellifluous and sweet
Gorgeous piece MARK!!........I love the way the write lives up to its title........a smooth delivery of great word choices......... in a slipstream of poetic phrasing..........ALL STARS..... well done brother poet!!.......... Love and Rockets!!........T xo
One sunday I had dinner with someone after a seminar we went to my apartment someone sang directly to me... bullshit was gone,no social media no electronics it was quiet and and nice...
and she was the most beautiful women i had ever seen..
Lol.....here they keep talking about a heat wave but there isn't a ray of sun peeking through the white blanket spread across the sky. Clouds are just one of the many things I can look at until my eyes make out some cool insanity from my mind.
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Gorgeous piece MARK!!........I love the way the write lives up to its title........a smooth delivery of great word choices......... in a slipstream of poetic phrasing..........ALL STARS..... well done brother poet!!.......... Love and Rockets!!........T xo
Tony thank you my man!!!
Hi mark little words
but written with sweet notes
lovely I enjoyed Debs
Deb thank you
I completely Love this poem.
thank you... you should!!!
One sunday I had dinner with someone after a seminar we went to my apartment someone sang directly to me... bullshit was gone,no social media no electronics it was quiet and and nice...
and she was the most beautiful women i had ever seen..
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sorry is that a frowny face???
No!! A face with a tear ( means it moved me )
good
read again changed last word
Beautiful beautiful beautiful beautiful poem I completely love it. It vibrates.
Wow thanks again Ms. Vani
Mark, terrific write using one of my favourite words, enjoyed the read...cheers man
Christopher thank you i am always glad when you comment
There is tranquillity in these words that mellifluously flow into the eyes and mind. Beautiful write Mark.
Devon thank you your cloud write has been stuck in mind last 24 hours has me looking up
Lol.....here they keep talking about a heat wave but there isn't a ray of sun peeking through the white blanket spread across the sky. Clouds are just one of the many things I can look at until my eyes make out some cool insanity from my mind.
LMAO
Hi Mark,
Short but sweet. The honey coated union, culminated with a sugar coated kiss.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Larry thanks...glad you liked it