Melodies For Lonely Stars

These days, she turns her cheek when people speak of love
These days, your name has been nothing but an echo,
Bouncing off some unnamed canyon in a state sheâs never visited.
Youâll fill that cavernous void
Youâll fill the void with fools and doll-faced girls
Who look too much or nothing at all like her
And youâll trick your malleable heart into feeling something for them.
But youâve forgotten your real love
Sheâs there
Sheâs there waiting
Smoking a cigarette atop a stained mattress draped in soft blue sheets,
Staring at a forgotten pillow and praying to a god she doesnât believe in,
That you were there beside her.
And she knows your beauty
She knows your beauty is powerful
But your power transcends your carefully curated aesthetic
In every fleeting moment of clarity
And unplanned sobriety.
You are her prince
But she is not a princess in need of rescue
She does not belong locked away in a tower in some cold castle
That only appears enchanting from a distance.
To her, you are nothing short of fantasy
You are a mythical, fire-breathing creature
Searching for someone with enough courage and soul to touch your wild heart,
And the wisdom to know it shall never be tamed.
You have written many evening melodies for lonely stars,
And placed them carefully in the hollow eyes of all your lovers,
But they burned out.
And your tired head met her pillow once again.
And you remembered.
Maybe this is our moment
Maybe we just forgot to set our clocks
Maybe we were in different time zones
Long before you crossed the date line.
If we donât save the daylight,
Itâll be dark again before too long.

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Comments
This is STUNNINGLY well written poetic prose CHRISSY!!......such sweepingly beautiful and insightful imagery!!..... a great dĂ©but piece!!.....ALL STARS!!... well done dear poet sister......and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?ââŽâ„âł???
Thank you so much for the warm welcome! glad to be here?
Wow! This really pulls at the heart strings.Â
Incredibly written
Best of luck!
I don't know where those words come from but the pictures she paints are are real as meaningful as a painting that moves you. Keep going.
Thank you! ?
Great work,brilliantly done ????
Thank you very much!Â
really fantastic piece. Your imagery is vivid. "Smoking a cigarette atop a stained mattress draped with soft blue sheets" makes me think of an Edward Hopper painting.
Love it. Welcome to cosmofunnel
Thank you! Everything in the poem was real. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Thought provoking write..
a good Anytime read.. All stars and pinned..
thanks for sharing Chrissy M.
Thanks so much!
Absolutely stunning should be so proud x
Thank you, Nadine! I am proud of this piece. If only I could write like this all the time... Haha
this is a fantastic write, your wording and construction is a lil different from what's posted on here, enjoyed your imagery, quality in every line....
ps. you should try to respond to the comments you received, that would be appreciated, please and thank you, cheers...like your work hope you have more than one poem in you, would love to see more Â
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'You have written many evening melodies for lonely stars,
And placed them carefully in the hollow eyes of all your lovers,
But they burned out.'Â
Thank you, friend! I appreciate your comment. I like being a little different. Hopefully I'll get another piece up here soon.Â
I don't know how Chrissy could write anything so poignant, gives me chills. Â She is an extremely gifted writer. Â I would love to see a book of her work.
Maybe one day!
Very sensitive, feelings coming from the heart and very emotionally charged, excellent poem.
Thank you kindly!