Poem -
MEMORIES OF THE COUNTRY FAIR
Off we went to the country fair
in the fields,breathing clean fresh air
Stalls all laden, with homemade foods
the smells entice, to buy the goods
Carousels turning, music playing
children smiling, happy laughing
A man with a hook to snare a duck
hoopla the game come try your luck
A pig is turning,sizzling on a spit
mouths are watering for a tasty bit
A picnic is spread upon the grass
everyone gather round raise a glass
Give thanks to god, for this food we eat
tuck in enjoy, hunger pangs retreat
Great family times spent, at the country fair
memories so happy.. when we all, were there.
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HI Deborah great poem I always love going to the countery fair lot fun I haven't been in long time matbe some day peace&love you
Hi Greg...Yes i enjoyed going too, so much fun i
can remember everything. You should go again
I`m glad you enjoyed my poem
Hugs Debs
Hi Cherie I was just thinking about the country fairs this morning
all the family used to go, we would stay all day great fun, was had
by all Really happy memories for me, and you i see
Thank you for the comments they are lovely
love n hugs Debs xox
hey deborah, what a cool poem this is....you perfectly captured all the senses with this one, and I believe that if someone came off a spaceship and had no idea what a country-fair was they would want to go check one out, terrific writing that captures the essence, love the subject matter as well, enjoyed a ton....cheers my friend
Hi Christopher great comments from you
Thanks very much i m glad you enjoyed
i loved writing this one and remembering
the atmosphere there Best wishes Debs
Hi Debs,
Those lovely time from the past when we were the children, together with our parents, aunts, uncles and frivolous cousins, at the wonderful family get together. Oh, those beautiful memories. So young. So innocent. So puerile. Nice words. Super nostalgic.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
HI Larry I agree great memories.
Us children would be so excited for weeks before the day
of the country fair, saving pennies for weeks to spend
Thank you for your comments glad you enjoyed
love n hugs Debs xo
less punctuation marks you dont need them
Hi Marcus Thank you for your advice
i shall take it on board
kind regards Debs