Poem -
Merciful God
Merciful God
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย By Grace La Porte
ย ย ย Edited by Devon La Porte
Rainy days are like tears
running down your face,
Upset God
looking down on the people of earth,
thinking of how they failed his ways.
He sent clouds
to cry for him
descending his feelings,
"God is in everything",
people will say
including clouds who feelย
his wrath, pain, and disease.
Thunder is anger they recall
and lightning is misery,
hurricanes are anger, fear, misery,
and sobbing all rolled into one,
But,
sunny days are forgivenessย
to troubled people
who are sorry for their crimes,
and apologize....to our dear God.
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Comments
Beautiful!
Thanks Lisa, and my daughter says thanks as well. She wrote this and I edited it a bit, but this was pretty much all her and she also asked if I would post this on here. I could not say no because of how proud of her I am, she is a cgip off the old block, and so what if Im bragging lol. This is a great confidence booster for her so thank you very much. Much love and peace.
Hello Grace and Devon...
Great work!ย
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongย
Thanks a million Sparrowsong, really it was all my daughter. She is so talented for 9 years old, and I will keep feeding her talent and watching her blossom into a wonderful writer. This is a proud dad moment lol. Love and peace to you sweet soaring soul.
Hello Grace and Devon. What a lovely poem Graceย
I have to say this is ย so well thought throughย
and written beautifully Iย enjoyed your story of god and the sun and rain
ย You are one clever young lady
Beautiful! all starsย
Hugs Debsย
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She truly is Debs, thank you. Her mind keeps churning out these stories and she has me looking at them and helping her spell words and show her about structure lol...it is a feel good bonding for me that she looks up to what I do as a passion. She will definitely be far more advanced than me when she gets to my age because i am pretty impressed for what she is coming up with at 9. She says thank you too Debs. Love and peace.
This is absolutely beautiful. I can't find any other words to describe it other than it is outstanding for such a young mind. I can't even imagine what she'll be writing when she's 15 even. She has a gift. Sending many words of encouragement her way!!ย
xxxLilyย ย
Thank you Lily. I am curious about that future too. The encouragement is greatly appreciated, I think her write is deep in interpretation, and the imagery and metahors are wonderful. Love and peace to you.
Hey Devon this is simply fantastic. You and your daughter did a awesome job . I may have my son help me write one as well . Take care Bradfordย
Thanks Rock. It was all her mind man. Me and her are actually working on a poem together but will see. I'm going to let her know of your appreciation man because she really gets a kick out of all this feedback. Love and peace to you.