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Messengers From Afar

Messengers From Afar

You know by cutting that tree,
You just destroyed me,
You tore my heart in three,
Destroyed my artistry?
I didn't ask to be,
But now I'm glad cause we,
Are moving swiftly,
Towards the unity,
Towards the days where we,
Are more than just you and me.
Maybe one day they'll see,
Maybe they'll set us free,
So we don't die tragically,
Without being who we,
Who we truly are:
Messengers from afar.

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Deborah Evans

HI  lukasz  I like the formatting and rhyming in your 
Piece but i can t seem to get to the heart of what it is about 
I wonder if you could enlighten me ? please I am thinking maybe the destruction 
of rainforests and such the cutting down of  the trees,Cheers  Debs 

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Lukasz Korbanski

Hello! Personally, this poem was written about a personal experience when my favourite tree I used to climb a lot and hang out around got cut down. But, I like the rainforest approach to it, yes. There is definitely an undertone of rage because of what is happening to the rainforests around the world. Overall, I just hope everyone finds their own meaning in the poem. 

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Deborah Evans

HI  lukasz every reader has their own interpretation  as you 
say that is the beauty of poetry, I understand your rage 
childhood memories are lovely to keep and change 
as in cutting your tree down can affect you  greatly 
i enjoyed Debs 

 

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