Poem -
Microwave Romance
The fast food infatuation...
the microwave one minute romance meal...
didn't last very long...
for a precious while there though...
wasn't the bird's sound even a little sweeter...
wasn't the whole earth suddenly warmer...
wasn't love slowly floating throughÂ
the blue summer sky...unseen...but sensed...
andÂ
didn't the light from her eyesÂ
ricochet off the wallsÂ
to land in my heart like sunshine!
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Good write Dan, what was done first the relationship or the meal in the microwave lol? I like these lines
"didn't the light from her eyesÂ
ricochet off the wallsÂ
to land in my heart like sunshine!" Cool interesting write allstars.
Thanks, Devon...I thot o that line , or one similar...just had to work in a poem somehow...have another line I like now... Just no poem yet, hee hee...ill be over ur site soon---- really like your stuff
Thanks Dan I have a lot poems to browse, and i also come up with lines that I later create poems around there is always a different approach to writing and my advice is to keep it up.
Thanks again, Devon...tis an honor, sir.
I loved this piece Dan, and I quite often get just a single line and work around it like you. Much love. G xx
Thanks, Georgina...means a lot common' from another writer... Neat to kno I'm not the only one who saves "a line"---smiles
Dan I really enjoyed this man, and it tingled my 'Spidey Senses' as well; lol....I can't tell you how much I enjoy interpreting a good poem.....I was thinking that this is an ode to 'organic' romance....the touch and three dimensional type that two people 'actually' live out....instead of the 'made up' ones where folks walk on clouds and bleed gold dust....hey I could be wrong about the interpretation, but I truly enjoyed the rush of your words, good stuff...have a nice evening....pull quoted lines struck me with fascination   Â
'didn't the light from her eyesÂ
ricochet off the wallsÂ
to land in my heart like sunshine!'
Again such an honor to be mentioned by a writer...will be exploring Correla Land soon...and I ain't just bleedin' gold dust...now there's a cool phrase!