Poem -

Sour Cream and Vinegar

a reaction to Milk and ? Honey

Sour Cream and Vinegar

I tried
reading
Your
Work
With
An
open
Mind

Really 
I did

however

When
Your
Used
To
Eating
Filet Mignon

Its hard
To
Digest
An instant
Cup of
" Cup o Noodles ? "
Soup

I get the
Fact
That
You are
Trying
To
Express
a new
Form
Of
Poetry

Aren't we all?

The substance
Is
Lacking .......

When
I read
The content 
Of

"Milk and ? Honey"

Though I have
Been told
It is about
Survival
And 
Today's
Feminism....

All I  really
get
From
It

Is a Millennial's 
sorry
Attempt
To
Express
Bitterness
In a way
That
The
Author
Receives
Instant
Gratification
Or a free trophy
From
The
Audience 
Of
Instagram 

Sounds
More
Like
SOUR CREAM
AND
VINEGAR

than

MILK AND HONEY

to me.....

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Being Me

?????  nice one, Greg. We can ALWAYS rely on you to say it like it is.  Some of her stuff is good though x

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author
Katina Woodruff...

Thanks Greg for another good poem! 

Is the poem about a movie star or fellow Cosmofunnel author? 
 

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