Poem -
MIND FUSE
Go,
Into the emptiness of scorn and drool
The Thorazine brained, inhibitions lose
Devouring inner substance
Morphing self talk
Milking the mind's muse
Drowning verbiage
Sizzling, the view
In a barn of hay
No way to move,
The match head
Ignites,
In flames
Mind,
Fuse,
Stop..
Tony Taylor
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Cool!!....Thanx CHRISTOPHER!!!......I did pick the picture to help the words hit home.....I actually chose three different pic's ......but this one seemed best!!......thanx for the positive feedback brother poet !!.......smiles::......T ?✳✴☀
Thanx CHERIE!!......I REALLY love how you can stand back from the write and see the physical shape of the tornado and then work that into the gorgeous comment...... you're amazing!!.....thanx again sweetheart!..... you're truly poetry!!....... kisses.....T ♥♥
So original write my friend ## mental insanity is a product of a cascading inner misery ## As Cherrie describes it even better -- like a tornado winding down ## I love the picture too ##
Hugs and rockets
Leah
Thank you dear poet sister LEAH!!...... always a pleasure to hear from you...... appreciate you taking time with this one!!.......thanx again!!...... stay groovy!!......T xo ?✳✴☀
That moment of madness where the mind goes for free fall and sparks feverish creativity...I like the relentless style of the write and the words used to describe it. Brilliant Tony
Thanx LOST!!.....I did have a lot of fun playing with the words on this one...... glad you pointed that out!...... says so much about you bro!!...... appreciate the positive feedback .....and the continued support my friend!!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✳✴☀
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
No lobotomy do I prescribe now
For they have been labled far too cruel
But with thorazine I can circumvent them
Bringing anger to mere drool
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
Dear Brother Poet LARRY!!
No reply too big or small
Doth my brother Larry Ran
Install,
In harmonious epitaph espy
My friend giveth
So much of his time
Delivered in his
Inimitable style!!
Love you bro!!..... smiles......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Roses are red
Violets are blue
My Brother loves me
And I love him too
Larry xxx
Hi Tony This is brilliant fantastic use of words and
formatting to hit home to the heart of the matter,of mental illness
the moment of losing ones mind clearly and articulately expressed
Great write my friend
"In a barn of hay
No way to move,
The match head
Ignites,
In flames
Mind,
Fuse,"
Hope your well my friend? missing being around here
Love n hugs Debs xo