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Hey TIFFANY!!...... this is a VERY clever piece.....I like the wordplay you employ here..... the way you use the long 'I' (eye) sound throughout the first two stanzas.... makes for a great poetic flow..... reads almost as humorous as you simply convey ~ "Back Off !!".kinda thing!!.... hope I didn't misinterpret your intent here......ALL STARS!!.....a compelling read dear poet sister!!..... and.... in case no one has said so...,,. WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?☀✴✳