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MIRACLES

MIRACLES

Miracles - like a never ending circle....infinite....
Read as one loop....

MIRACLES
              happen in
                           DREAMS
                     create 
POSSIBILITIES 
                       exist in
                                 LIFE
         endless brings
MIRACLES 
 

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Terry Reeves

Hi P,
Nice meaningful text,
nice picture.
Nice you.
Love,
Terry.
x

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Terry! For reading and lovely comment. Px💜

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Jill Tait

I lovr your clever layout on such positivity my love so pinned too 💕❤️💕

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Jill! I like messing around with text. I actually had this written as a circle but I cant write it like that on Cosmo text box! Thanks for reading and pin. Px 😁 💕

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Jill Tait

Aww well you are very talented luv Well done xxx

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The fish of the sea

The layout is becoming such a signature of your work. Its hook is so captivating. I really enjoyed your work too! Everything works out in the end. Kudos, peace and smiles. TFOTS 

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Max. Glad it appeals to people. Glad you like my style. I do like playing with text. I actually had this written in a circle but cant type it like that on cosmo. Thanks for reading! Px💜

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Shaun Cronick

A small poem and food for thought that delivers its message more than well.
And read your first reply about wanting it to be spherical and leading back to itself, but alas not. A concrete poem as they're called.
I wrote one called Life To Death and I'll try to put it up either later or tomorrow.
But for now thank you for writing and sharing your thought-provoking poem and after all the world is a circle. Pinned for a reread and take care.

 

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Pratibha Savani

Hey Shaun. Thank you for the pin and comments. So nice to know u like this one. Yes it would be read as a continuous loop...the words in capitals would be read twice...once ending the sentence...then beginning the next sentence....
I guess I could have written it fully out the old fashion way but what's the fun in that!?!! Appreciate you taking time to read. Px

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Being Me

Cleverly done P!  I am so sorry I have missed a lot of your wonderful poems. Catching up now. It is si eady to miss things on Cosmo if real life keeps you busy for a bit x

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you so much Tina. I was playing with words. Actually I would even have this written in a circle.  But I didn't think it would be easy to read on here so set it this way.
I am the same I am always catching up!! Thanks for reading my unique piece. Px 

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