Would be so easy to trust a face like that Val lol!! Guess that's the whole point. Great image and lovely haiku. You are really good at doing these, nicely penned:)
Job well done Val...Jason Luke stated, that he will pick up the pen for the good of all reasons,(you) and that you were teaching him the true art of Haiku, couldnt ask for a better teacher and judging from his writes, he has a good heart for the long (in format) poems but judging from where his head is right now and how he feels for you, (the blunt and straight to the point) short Haiku's, which are based on true feelings in all aspects of writing, will be mastered by him as well....You have placed more Haikus out there than any, keep it up Valerie, these are powerful and pure in substance and meaning poems of the (factual) heart..Again job very well done...
Jim - Thank you for always leaving such uplifting and encouraging comments! I am trying to teach him how to write this type of poem and he is really thinking hard about one so hopefully he can post it soon!
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Would be so easy to trust a face like that Val lol!! Guess that's the whole point. Great image and lovely haiku. You are really good at doing these, nicely penned:)
Trust me...it is great having an innocent looking face! I used to hate when people told me I didn't look my age but now I love it! :)
Thanks for the comment!
Val ♥
Very deep, says so much,well wrote again,
Regards Mark x
Thank you Mark! I truly appreciate you taking the time to write to me!
Val ♥
Job well done Val...Jason Luke stated, that he will pick up the pen for the good of all reasons,(you) and that you were teaching him the true art of Haiku, couldnt ask for a better teacher and judging from his writes, he has a good heart for the long (in format) poems but judging from where his head is right now and how he feels for you, (the blunt and straight to the point) short Haiku's, which are based on true feelings in all aspects of writing, will be mastered by him as well....You have placed more Haikus out there than any, keep it up Valerie, these are powerful and pure in substance and meaning poems of the (factual) heart..Again job very well done...
Kind regards,
Jim
Jim - Thank you for always leaving such uplifting and encouraging comments! I am trying to teach him how to write this type of poem and he is really thinking hard about one so hopefully he can post it soon!
Love Always,
Val ♥