Poem -
THE MISTY VALE
A tree once grew
Sheltered in this misty vale.
Standing beautiful
A treat for all.
As each season rolled gently by
It`s limbs spread strong and oh so tall.
As the misty light shone down
Onto it`s magnificence, tall and wide.
The tree basked in the gentle light
But sadly after many centuries the tree quietly died.
Now the misty vale terribly feels it`s loss.
But wait, the tree still blooms serene and bright
It`s beauty is even greater now
Nurtured in heaven by Gods tender might.
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Hi G, I liked the way you caught me there at the end, when it died and came back, I was surprised that its return was in heaven.............pretty............well done my friend..........tony xx
Thank you sweety for reading this one. You are the first to notice about the poor going to heaven. I`m glad you liked it though T`. Love G xx
Thank you sweety for reading this one. You are the first to notice about the poor tree going to heaven. I`m glad you liked it though T`. Love G xx
Dear Georgina ,fabulous write love
Thank you sweety, glad you liked it. Love G xx
VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL ILLUSTRATED POEM. I love the way you told the story and painted the picture for us to enjoy just how beautiful an image this tree represented. You did an excellent job with that.
Thank you S` I`m so glad you liked this one. Thank you for such a wonderful compliment, it`s brightened my day. Love G xx