Misunderstanding
Relationship

MISUNDERSTANDING
Thought you always understood me
You witnessed tons of crumbled papers
Ruptured poetries and undone proses
Agonised woeful melodious my verses
With Gloom filled manuscripts
Of Unfinished, untold stories
Awaiting ,to be completed
Glued, in brain undeleted
Thought you always understood me
You would hear heart bleeding
Loud screams the inner weeping
Emitted from shattered reveries
Stored scattered in the tablet
Meaningless marks on the bed,
that red bloodstained couplets
That resonants still in my head .
Thought you always understood me
Observed that dark penumbra
That creeped and teared me
You heard that ferocious shrieks
Squealing that sound aloud
Oh! I am tired ,I am a failure
Utter nonsense may it sound
That imprisoned me in mire
Thought you always understood me
You would sense my tears
Whenever I failed to cry
Rebuff all the people out here
That enjoys the weaknesses
You would see the Frankenstein
That engrossed my mind
You should hear vociferous
Thought you always understood me
You would visualise that face
Which I have faked many times
The failure which I have masked
you would identify the character
that I miserably failed to become
Hoping against hope,
My Mind you would interpret
Found you misunderstood is reality
You always feigned to read my mind
Pushed me more towards insanity
wish someone someday read my mind.
Kishore Vastani

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Comments
Hello KISHORE!!....I could feel the longing to be understood here....you've delivered some fine Imagery and phrasing with VERY well crafted rhyme scheme ~ with a fine sense of rhythm and timing!!......A Truly melancholy piece shared from deep within!!......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet brother....and...in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thanks tony, appreciate your comments and understanding.👍
Hi Kishore. Welcome!
interesting verses and I like the use of words in your rhyme - Frankenstein was pretty good but quite a few others really good. Was lovely to read. Px💜
Welcome!.................Jim
Communication is a buzz word in any relationship. Well done.
Wow! What a poem! Very deep layered good branch out to analogies as well! Enjoyed it a lot. Welcome to the Cosmos! You will fit right in! Kind regards. TFOTS
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