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Misunderstanding

Relationship

MISUNDERSTANDING

                    Thought you always understood me
                    You witnessed tons of crumbled papers
                    Ruptured poetries and undone  proses
                    Agonised woeful melodious my verses

                      With Gloom filled manuscripts
                      Of Unfinished, untold stories
                      Awaiting ,to be completed
                      Glued, in brain  undeleted
                  
                    Thought you always understood me
                    You would hear heart bleeding
                     Loud screams the inner weeping
                     Emitted from shattered reveries    
                                                      
                    Stored scattered in the tablet
                    Meaningless marks on the bed,              
                    that red bloodstained couplets
                    That resonants still in my head .                    
                 

                 Thought you always understood me
                  Observed that dark penumbra
                  That creeped and teared me
                  You heard that ferocious shrieks

                  Squealing that sound aloud
                  Oh! I am tired ,I am a failure
                 Utter nonsense may it sound
                 That imprisoned  me in mire

                  Thought you always understood me
                  You would sense my tears
                  Whenever I failed to cry
                  Rebuff all the people out here

                That enjoys the weaknesses
                You would see the Frankenstein
                That engrossed my mind
                 You should hear vociferous
                     
                    
                Thought you always understood me
                You would visualise that face
                Which I have faked many times
                The failure which I have masked

                              
                                 
              you would identify the character
              that I miserably failed to become
              Hoping against hope,
              My Mind you would interpret
                                                       

             Found you misunderstood is reality
             You always feigned to read my mind
             Pushed me more towards insanity
             wish someone someday read my mind.
Kishore Vastani
                               
                                                   

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Tony Taylor

Hello KISHORE!!....I could feel the longing to be understood here....you've delivered some fine Imagery and phrasing with VERY well crafted rhyme scheme ~ with a fine sense of rhythm and timing!!......A Truly melancholy piece shared from deep within!!......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet brother....and...in case no one has said so......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Kishore Vastani

Thanks tony, appreciate your comments and understanding.👍

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Kishore. Welcome!
interesting verses and I like the use of words in your rhyme - Frankenstein was pretty good but quite a few others really good. Was lovely to read. Px💜

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Yiyan Han

Communication is a buzz word in any relationship. Well done.

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The fish of the sea

Wow! What a poem! Very deep layered good branch out to analogies as well! Enjoyed it a lot. Welcome to the Cosmos! You will fit right in! Kind regards. TFOTS

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