MITZEE
Waiting for Mitzee the cat as I sleep
To curl up upon me at night by my feet
Remember you through my childhood days
Guinea pigs
The shed
The smell of fresh hay
Fairy dust being sprinkled amongst friends
Jumping and climbing
Driving family round the bend
The street out front was a different world
Making purfume with roses
With some of the girls! Â
The ice cream van and its jingling bells
I liked the oysters and the candyfloss smells
Water fights with the parents
Through the long Summer days
The hiding places we played in and made
Climbing the wall
Spiderman webs
Fixing Matthews bike
I broke my leg
Cousin Julia and her fresh eggs
Noel and Tracy
My first cigarette!
The crescent above and memories so true
At the start of our life's
Quickthorn Crescent
With you :)
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wow! this poem is, transporting, great formatting, you packed in a lot of memories into this poem, Aaron, this is great, my friend, felt like I was there, enjoyed very much, thanks for posting this free micro-vacation to a wonderful place and time....cheers
Great! Thankyou so much for you comments Christopher, much appreciated, Thanks. Aaron
Hey AARON!!........I agree completely with Chris!!......... felt like I was in your journal and reading of your childhood memories........... it was transporting & VERY compelling.......... the formatting is excellent........ but mostly I am appreciative that you helped us to learn a bit about yourself!!............ALL STARS........ well done brother poet!!.......... Love to you and yours!!............T xo
Tony, thank you too. Great you took the time to comment. I appreciate it greatly. Thanks. Aaron