Poem -
Modern Day Helen of Troy
With a face that someone said launched a thousand ships
Who could make me immortal with a kiss
Who can break a man’s heart and make him melt with a glance
There’s a feeling that if I touch I will burn
flesh and blood the gods envy.
I seek your hand, need to be near you, and to feel once again.
I want you to ask me to walk into the sea and drown with you.
For then we shall be together forever..
You have changed me with your glance.
I am a super black hole, an exploding Planet
You are Unobtainium
You are the Helen of modern times
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Hey Mark!!.....this is an excellent write...........the accurate references to Helen of Troy..........related to your HER............of modern times............it's elegant in it's delivery..........and I I take my hat off to you for "UNOBTAINIUM" ~ way cool bro..............Love and Rockets!!.............T xo
Thank you Tony ....I always feel great when you like one I put down.
.Love and Rockets back at ya!!!
Hello Mark...
The way you put this all together...
Great write...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
sparrowsong thank you ...you are always so encouraging
Mark!  Excellent write.  I like the descriptive imagery in the work…the way you "melt down" your emotions until you reach the state of impending immortality…"I want you to ask me to walk into the sea and drown with you…For then we shall be together forever."  All consuming…unobtainable…yet one kiss, one caress just might transport you to Olympian heights!
val
Val thanks for the great comments.i am so glad you liked it...
Thank you Olga
So creative and imaginative. I have read some ot your other poems and they always show great creativity and imagination.
Shirley thank you so much!!!