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I write down my pain like there’s someone to read it
My pen burns on the page in a rush like I need it
I’ve got nothing to say on the days where there’s someone
All alone it’s all there I don’t know where it comes from
It’s just pages of woe and of love and regret
They’re just scrawls that don’t rhyme I’ve not finished one yet
I’m in love with the pain and in pain from the love
There’s just nothing to gain from not feeling enough
So I feel and I feel and it hurts and feels good
And I write that shit down like it’s something I should.
 

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Gerard McGowan

I'm in love with the pain
in pain from the love
 

Excellent poetry

We tend to find comfort in the pain, it becomes all we know and feel but don't let it consume you

Great first entry, I can honestly say that there are so many people who can relate to this including myself

Keep it up, ask the questions only poets ask and you will find the answers you are looking for.

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theycallmetreacle

Wow, thank you ever so much!

Oh it really can become our map and compass can't it? I indulge occasionally but try to remember I can come back to sat nav anytime I need to :)

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

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Simon Bromley

Welcome and congrats on such an awesome poem.  Thoroughly enjoyed, well done.

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Silent Dreamer

I'm definitely a fan! I've read some of your work and you express yourself so raw and honestly, it's a pleasure to read. Another beautiful yet painful write, love it👏🏽

I’m in love with the pain and in pain from the love
There’s just nothing to gain from not feeling enough

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theycallmetreacle

Wow! Honestly the response from this page after a day of using it has spurred me to write and write and write a little more!

Thanks so much, it means a lot to have such beautiful lyricists comment on my poetry.

 

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