More? or Less..?
Perspective
Hope is hope-less fear,
Hope is hope,
is hopeless fear?
Home is home-less lost,
Home is home,
is homeless lost?
Rest is rest-less impatient,
Rest is rest,
is restless impatient?
Doubt is doubt-less certain,
Doubt is doubt,
is doubtless certain?
Use is use-less redundant,
Use is use,
is useless redundant?
Mind is mind-less careless,
Mind is mind,
is mindless careless?
Fear is fear-less brave,
Fear is fear
is fearless brave?
End is end-less dreaming,
End is end,
is endless dreaming?
Life is life-less dying,
Life is life,
is lifeless dying?
More,
or less...
©️ Copyright Graham Marshall
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Comments
Nicely written angel
Thankyou ❤
Intriguing ink my friend.
Thankyou Simon, experimental more than anything with this one...
Graham ❤
It is an interesting but very strong write.
Hope is so important... What have we got when all hope is lost? Nothing! And that is frightening. So I totally get the first line and I think it leads on into the poem perfectly x
Thankyou for your lovely comments, it's experimental in style... Rules? What rules! ? sometimes it's what you say that's important rather than how you say it... "Hope is hope, less is fear"
"Life is life, less is dying"
Graham ❤