A mothers love

A lovely poem dear Nardine, My applause, My vote

My love has many feathers ,
I'll pluck them one by one,
I'll pass them to you,
In times of need,
My beautiful daughters,
My adorable son,

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

No love is as special as a mother and child you capture that nicely n a well written poem loved it.

Declamatory delineation,...I am much pleased to read this poem 'A mother love',..perfection of the work is noted throughout.."My love has many feathers,...My love a gentle breeze, A mother love, A magical crystal ball, That see's all.",...peculiar vision....very good...I love the verse....with regards,....xx Ravindra Kumar xx

Nardine, Nardine, Nardine,

Lady my skin tingled throughout this entire poem and the sincerity of your words, to your little ones, exuberated from this poem and into the hearts, of your many readers and  very obviously, from you, to your young children.....This poem flowed so freely in style and so rhymaticly placed together, it was as though my stomach was became increasingly hungry, for what my eyes were so privilege, to have had the chance, to have read....(A True Mothers Love, is this one), nurtured to the "T", protected from all things, great and small and from all heights, for your little ones, no limits, are there  by you, to be bound. A mother, that places her young ones above all things, including herself, is a “true and original mother”...Really love this poem and honor you dearly, I do, for your strong love, respect and family values, bestowed  you, by your parents and extended family,(mother in law), before you...Those that you love and lost, remains,(still) with you and the promises you made them, in regards to always being there, for your little ones, will forever be filled, it in fact, has been and always will be, “top priority”...”Not only are you a very honorable mom, and lady, your poetic skills, is more remarkable , than I thank, you tend to take credit for”…Another one of my favorites, is this one….Amazing, simply amazing.....I am sure to be, a favorite by moms with kids, or even dads with kids and tend to be holding down the fort, on his own. In fact a blue print for all to be modeled on and by, in the structured, inner family circles. Cherie has amazed me, with the abundance of poems, she has placed out there and Sir WilIiamji, (Poem God), so many I stopped counting, and now you Nardine, it appears, have dipped into the scrabbled pot of poems, and constructing, some heavy–duty master pieces, that you find yourself,(the reader) reciting, even after you have read it, at least, (3) times are better…A lot of thought, feeling, pride, trust and promises made and to be kept, placed in and written all over this poem…Leaving the reader, continuously proud, of the writer and routing for, her in her quest, through and down, the road of motherhood…

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My love has many feathers,

I'll pluck them one by one,

I'll pass them to you,

In times of need,

My beautiful daughters,

My adorable son,

        -And-

If ever you’re feeling down,

And see no end in sight,

I'd shed them all,

Just for you,

To see your

Hearts take flight,

Souring high across the sky,

Never to see you cry,

Wonderful write, (My Friend)

Jimmy