Poem -

Motion in the nature

Part I

Motion in the nature

Over myself there is a brown sunshade covering the white sunshine
the pale clouds are passing over the land
and on top lays the sky
the infinite space
with the moon and the stars that remind me of our hot summer nights

the rain starts falling from this blue infinitude
and as i walk in the wet grass with my bare feet
i feel the strong earth supporting me
and as i look up to the sky i catch a glimps of the multicolor

they say you’ll find your treasure at the end of a rainbow
darling will you be there waiting for me?
hold me, love me,touch me honey
be the prince charming of my dreams.

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Randall smith

Very good.  I like how you draw a picture and I can see it.

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NorahKan

Hey , thank you for your opinion. I really appreciate it. I’m kind of new to poetry and writing in general so i take feedback very seriously. <<3 

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