Poem -
Mrs Evergreen (Idle Minded)
Come let me take you to a place, a place you've never been,
You'll stand in awe as soon as you saw, Mrs Evergreen.
Her curves her shape in her landscape,
The best you've ever seen,
Buildings stands, surrounding the lands of
Mrs Evergreen.
Let's take a walk in the park,
Like an idle teen,
I would be her light in the dark,
Mrs Evergreen.
I gave her flowers she gave me trees,
All hail the queen,
I fell in love at first sight with,
Mrs Evergreen.
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Wow! ~ Nicois (interesting name?).... the timing and the metering on this piece is outstanding,,,,,,,, it almost reads like a song lyric when you read it aloud.......... the repetition of the word Evergreen helps it flow beautifully.......... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered..........I've never read you before....... so........WELCOME to COSMO!!............ well done...........T xo
Thank you Tony. Your right I just started last night and Mrs Evergreen I just wrote along with this one I'm about to publish right now... I write atkeast two poems a day since yesterday so you will see lots from me
Hi Nicois,
Such a wonderful lover to have; Mother Nature. She will only take less than half of what you give, and remunerate you with her everlasting beauty. Powerful wright, my friend.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry