Murder/Suicide

It has been
a
Month
or
so
Since you left this earth
and took with you
the one
you claimed you love
Initially I wrote
a poem
about you
that showed shock
and compassion
I guess this one
portrays contempt...
You were apart
of the military elite
a brother in arms
to my son
Yet with all the
military training
in the end
you were no better
than a deserter
Your weakness
overtook
the duty
you swore
to uphold...
As a Veteran
who served
during time
of war
I turn my back
to you
for
you did not
bring glory
to the flag
instead
illuminated
the characteristics
of a
coward.....................
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WOW!! GREG!!....VERY powerful words, eloquently delivered and directed!!....not to take away from the intent..... but the flow in this write is extremely well supported by the formatting..... well conceived, well considered, & BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....I find the subject matter here fascinating having come from a military family!!..... and from what little I know of the details.... I am in complete agreement!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done brother poet!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?✳✴☀♥??
Tony
Thank you so much for your kind words. This is about a tragedy that recently happened. I guess these words are my way of going through the stages of grief....
Thanks so much for your input!!!!
Tony if you read my poem " Just A Step Away" it is the first poem I wrote about this. I actually thought I would get more comments on the first poem, but my audience does not always agree.... LOL
I DID bro!!....I read it with Cherie.... or rather she read it aloud to me.... and then we discussed it over a shredded chicken sandwich last night..... great stuff my friend....I think you're going to get a lot of inspiration out of your experiences!!..... intriguing subject matter..... looking forward to more!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....Txo ?✳✴???
Thank You Tony!!! I am Glad you and Cheri liked it! You are both such great writers. I enjoy reading your poems. You both are an inspiration to me.......