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Murder/Suicide

Murder/Suicide

It has been
a
Month 
or 
so
Since you left this earth
and took with you
the one 
you claimed you love

Initially  I wrote 
a poem
about you
that showed shock
and compassion
I guess this one
portrays contempt...

You were apart 
of the military elite
a brother in arms
to my son
Yet with all the 
military training
in the end
you were no better
than a deserter
Your weakness
overtook
the duty
you swore
to uphold...

As a Veteran
who served
during time 
of war
I turn my back
to you 
for 
you did not
bring glory
to the flag
instead 
illuminated
the characteristics
of a 
coward.....................

 

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! GREG!!....VERY powerful words, eloquently delivered and directed!!....not to take away from the intent..... but the flow in this write is extremely well supported by the formatting..... well conceived, well considered, & BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....I find the subject matter here fascinating having come from a military family!!..... and from what little I know of the details.... I am in complete agreement!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done brother poet!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?✳✴☀♥??

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GREG TUCKER THE...

Tony
Thank you so much for your kind words.  This is about a tragedy that recently happened.  I guess these words are my way of going through the stages of grief....
Thanks so much for your input!!!!

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GREG TUCKER THE...

Tony if you read my poem " Just A Step Away"  it is the first poem I wrote about this.  I actually thought I would get more comments on the first poem, but my audience does not always agree.... LOL

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Tony Taylor

I DID bro!!....I read it with Cherie.... or rather she read it aloud to me.... and then we discussed it over a shredded chicken sandwich last night..... great stuff my friend....I think you're going to get a lot of inspiration out of your experiences!!..... intriguing subject matter..... looking forward to more!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....Txo ?✳✴???

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GREG TUCKER THE...

Thank You Tony!!!  I am Glad you and Cheri liked it!  You are both such great writers.  I enjoy reading your poems.  You both are an inspiration to me.......

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