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Murky Mirage

Murky Mirage

My mind

Continually evolves

Into empty

Black Chambers 

Forever binding

Bloody images

Secretly blinding

Troubled waters

Casting memories

Distorted bodies

Haunting eyes

Stories untold

Recollection permit

Shattered lives

Rapture disguise

Better options

Inferior lies

Our choices

Fixated obsession 

Forever dormant

Co-write between Linda Hope and Valerie Lynn (Mother and Daughter)

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Tony Taylor

Like Mother ~ Like daughter!!..... amazing continuity for being a co-write........ there's an appreciation for the darkness that has its place in this reality....... and having read and spoken with Val.......I get the feeling I know you a little better.......VERY well crafted and symbiotic phrasing between you two........VERY compelling read!!........ALL STARS......." Fixated obsession, forever dormant.." .....Love it........ well done ladies!!....... your cyber-friend and admirer!!......T xo

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Valerie Lynn

I am beyond proud of this write with my mama!! This is how insomnia can benefit writing. She is my rock and has supported me through thick and thin. She has and continues to be there for me in all that I am going through. I am the luckiest daughter to have not only an amazing woman as a mother but have the most wonderful mother any daughter could ever ask for. I am the blessed one. I didn't know about her little hidden talent until this past year and I was blown away reading her writing!! I am trying to encourage her to post more and I think she will!! Thanks for the comments! I can't wait to tell her tomorrow that someone actually read it and left comments!! 

-Val ?

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Jason Luke

Wow my wife and mother-n-law are talented!! Can't believe how crazy good this one is!! Well done lady's.  

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Valerie Lynn

Thanks babe!! I am actually extremely pleased with how this turned out!! I'm thankful to have you and my mom in my life...always!! 

Mom - I'm especially grateful for the night you were able to keep me company even when you are so far away and I couldn't sleep!! I'm shocked the method we created at 4:00 a.m. actually made it flow together so nicely. Who would have ever thought our words together would tell such a story. I can't wait to post our next write!! What an honor to have this one nominated. ?  Love you!!

-Val ?

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Valerie Lynn

Actually I think you should post the next co-write first ? AND then pleeease post your other poem!! I know people will be able to relate to it. Love you!! 

Val ?

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