Murky Mirage

My mind
Continually evolves
Into empty
Black Chambers
Forever binding
Bloody images
Secretly blinding
Troubled waters
Casting memories
Distorted bodies
Haunting eyes
Stories untold
Recollection permit
Shattered lives
Rapture disguise
Better options
Inferior lies
Our choices
Fixated obsession
Forever dormant
Co-write between Linda Hope and Valerie Lynn (Mother and Daughter)
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Like Mother ~ Like daughter!!..... amazing continuity for being a co-write........ there's an appreciation for the darkness that has its place in this reality....... and having read and spoken with Val.......I get the feeling I know you a little better.......VERY well crafted and symbiotic phrasing between you two........VERY compelling read!!........ALL STARS......." Fixated obsession, forever dormant.." .....Love it........ well done ladies!!....... your cyber-friend and admirer!!......T xo
I am beyond proud of this write with my mama!! This is how insomnia can benefit writing. She is my rock and has supported me through thick and thin. She has and continues to be there for me in all that I am going through. I am the luckiest daughter to have not only an amazing woman as a mother but have the most wonderful mother any daughter could ever ask for. I am the blessed one. I didn't know about her little hidden talent until this past year and I was blown away reading her writing!! I am trying to encourage her to post more and I think she will!! Thanks for the comments! I can't wait to tell her tomorrow that someone actually read it and left comments!!
-Val ?
Wow my wife and mother-n-law are talented!! Can't believe how crazy good this one is!! Well done lady's.
Thanks babe!! I am actually extremely pleased with how this turned out!! I'm thankful to have you and my mom in my life...always!!
Mom - I'm especially grateful for the night you were able to keep me company even when you are so far away and I couldn't sleep!! I'm shocked the method we created at 4:00 a.m. actually made it flow together so nicely. Who would have ever thought our words together would tell such a story. I can't wait to post our next write!! What an honor to have this one nominated. ? Love you!!
-Val ?
Actually I think you should post the next co-write first ? AND then pleeease post your other poem!! I know people will be able to relate to it. Love you!!
Val ?