Murmur of the River
"hum of a journey''
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Like the veins in our body transporting life, the river flows…
passing through the earth’s veins
ever changing, always breathing with the endless flow.
Each stone is a story--rolled over, unturned or left untold,
each grain of sand is time past and time present,
as for the future,
not even the sands of time will let you know.
He murmurs love songs
when passing fields where men and women toil,
sings a lullaby when barefoot children play in the meadows
hiding and seeking at inviting shores.
As seasons pass
the river keeps pulsing and dancing around the bends,
he flows, he burbles, and carries on…
in continue devotion he runs, sings and hums,
runs…runs…
till the hour comes and he becomes the ocean,
--the ocean where his journey ends. He knows!
Turbulence may disturb your sleep,
yet, waters subside giving calm to a gentle tomorrow.
He’ll carry your sad tears when you weep under stars
and invite you to sit by his shore
when you need some console.
Say nothing, just listen! He’ll murmur!
but if you cannot be at his shore, he’ll come to you.
Your mind is fertile your heart is wild
and the river, same as you, has a soul,
clear and free—like a child!
--Bernadete vdw, '24
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'Take me down to the River.' Lovely Poetry. 🩵
A beautiful read on this cold November morn... hugs x
Then I have to send you lots of sunshine dear Marion.
Hello Bernadete...
Happy Veteran's Day to you, yours, and your Readers too...
Peace in Strength?
Beautiful write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thank you very much Sparrowsong. Peace to you too
B .
Pinned because I totally get this and also because it has been so beautifully written. Wonderful work x
Very much appreciated! I know you get this, you’re very good with metaphors, and I think you’re in touch with nature as well. Enjoy your piece, in your side of the world.
Cheers Tina. B
Say no more, for the morrow never cometh.
That’s right! Thank you Nine Eleven. All the best to you. B
You really understand flowing waters. I always wake up at the side of streams (preferably mountain streams, but then, that means I am out of the country having a holiday, which is a huge help for "playing hide and seek"). Our part of The Netherlands is just one large plain too road and people filled, but then again, we gave a little stream close by and to walk by it always is a great relief... Love it and I give thanks for the eternal cycle of sea-rain-river-sea...
Very nice of you, John. I am happy you enjoyed this piece. It seems like you have an affinity with water. I do have a deep love for rivers, streams and brooks. I am from New Zealand after all.
Thank you for your appreciation. B
P.S. This is also a metaphor for our own life journey. But no need to say, you know it.
An extraordinary journey filled to the very point of overflowing with beauty .. a hum of a journey indeed .. and I am delighted to have been invited to tag along .. Neville
You are always invited, Neville. Thank you for coming over.
That's damn good to read .. thank you .. N
Dear Bernadette,
The beauty of your poem brings watered tears to my eyes, again inspiring a haiku.
Rivers run through them
The Souls of humanity
Bending to their whims
Peace and love,
Larry xxx
Dear Larry,
What a pleasure to receive such
beautiful words from you. And if my poem touched you, it was worth every word & thought.
You wrote a brilliant Haiku, Thank you Larry.
Bernadete
Dear Bernadette,
It is such an honor to be honored by such a great poet!
Peace and love,
Larry xxx
The flow of creation found everywhere. Well written with your usual aplomb.
Very nice of you, John. Thank you! B