Poem -
MUSIC
Harder, tougher, stronger the minds
Before music, as ice to the sun, melts.
Heaviness to hearty, sorrow to solace
To soul, when flows, the music.
So deep the sea, peak the mountains
Stretchy, never ending the deserts,
Thick the forest, and the sky boundless.
Far high, dominating, the music, surpasses.
Music, the language of mind, common to all
Where no religion, no colour, no caste at all.
It's a wave, flows over the boundaries
No barrier, any where, spreads every where.
To a stressed mind, the healing touch
To the celestial spot, transports the mind
Relaxed, relieved, and retired
To a solitude of spiritual sensation.
sayed thangal
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Dear friends,
don't you feel what I felt on music?
Yes great poem!
thanks Josie Evans for your comment,
with regards ,sayed
Greetings (Bro) Sayed,
The (Alphas and Omegas) of all that exist and will exist, in this poems, for every cause there is an affect and music, (just as this poem), has its own way, of soothing the savage heart in all of us and with no stipulations of monetary gain attached.You have once again captured the essence of a single note and transformed it, into a serenade worthy for all to hear and become tranquil to....Love this poem and the way you have presented it, just as you always do and with a powerful, well learned,(message attached).....
Take Care My Friend,
Jim
Thanks a lot my dear Jim,
As you always do, now itself you have studied and analysed this poem in detail. I always like to write such this type of topic and your support and encouragements have done much on me.
Music, a wonderful abstract aspect that overtakes every thing, thank you once more, dear Jim
sayed
Greetings my friend,
You are quite welcome sir and you have given us all, a tune to carry and a musical note to always listen to, if not out loud, (quietly) can we enjoy it, in our head, from your imagery and well presented words of times of solace.
Thanks my friend,
Jim
the rhythm of life Sayed very nice x
thanks Susan
a very beautiful poem sayed indeed it captures everything music does to the mind and soul .i think music is a masterpiece around the world as like poems we can let feelings be heard through sound excellent poem sayed all the best tina x
When I first was trying to read this, many great things stated, I thought you were saying music surpasses music. This is great.
Mich
Thanks very much Tina and Mich for encouragements,
sayed
Just a lovely piece, Sayed..
Thank you madam Medhini and Vargheese Kutty for your comment, surely an inspiration to compose more.
I love it. It is absolutely amazing. I love how you express the love for music.
I express my gratitude to Hana Shilo, the lover of music, for sharing views on it.
with love, sayed
great poem sayed and a great topic because music speaks to all and expresses all kinds of emotions
love it!
Hi Asma,
thanks a lot for your encouragements and support in this regard,
sayed thangal
what else can i say except that each and every word in this poem is true and I must agree with the thoughts and ideas presented and depicted in it. You are so successful in mingling your words with your feelings. nicely woven.dear sayed.
Hi Khan, thank you for your comment, hope your support in future
sayed
this is really good. great job on this
Thanks a lot for your encouragements .
sayed
Thanks so much Susan for your kind words and glad to know, Indians were your coworkers,
all the best, sayed
I come from a family of musicians. My Dad taught me how to read and write music. I played the clarinet as a child. I think music holds prophecy and portent as well as memories. Music reaches the soul as no other venue can. It allows a freedom to explore terrain that can be traversed spiritually. Excellent write!
Hello Valerie, very well you put it your words here, as an ardent lover of music you evaluated the poem creatively,
thanks,sayed
Music is one of my great loves, and what you say in your poem is true. Music has the power to lift our spirits, and it can carry a message or be light-hearted. Long live music! I enjoyed reading this poem.
Music is one of my great loves, and what you say in your poem is true. Music has the power to lift our spirits, and it can carry a message or be light-hearted. Long live music! I enjoyed reading this poem.
Thanks Robert, your comment and positive encouragements would be beneficial for me, I like to select such topics again,
with regards, sayed
thanks once more for your kind words,
sayed