Poem -
Music of Life
dedicated to ..........Kay!
Song of the forest; down by the tripping creek,
Wind whistles through, toads trying to speak.
Soaring Eagle screams! across the long valley,
All the rabbits scatter! from their social rally.
Pine needles soften steps; of the tip toeing deer,
While the Mountain Lion stalks; from rocks very near!
Knock of the Woodpecker; echoing through the trees,
Announcing the Elk's bugle; carried on the breeze.Ā
Mountains add a chorus of distance and play!
To the waterfall's cascading; roaring display!
Happy are the chipmunks; in their rocky terrain!
To ad little chirps; in the calming refrain.
Hawk's shriek! slices through the air like a knife!
Cutting a portal; for the music of life.
Ā
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wow stunning ending to a truly beautiful piece. I have missed nature this past year. Thank you for submerging me into its wonderful sounds today
Gwen :)Ā Ā
My pleasure Gwen! thank you!
Song of the forest; down by the tripping creek,
Wind whistles through, toads trying to speak.
Soaring Eagle screams! across the long valley,
All the rabbits scatter! from their social rally.
Jim my lad you never fail to blow me away with your perfect rhyming flow throughout all your versesā¦. Abfabulous ladā¦ from your biggest fan š¹ā¤ļøš¹
thank you bunches my abfab friend , from your biggest fan!
Wow!! JIM!!.....a truly beautiful sonnet......and not only is this VERY poetic but it has an educational aspect to it that is undeniable......you understand and convey the sounds created in the wilderness exceptionally well.....like the soundlessness that pine needles create on the forest floor......PINNED for your effort to bring "The Music Of Life" to the masses......Bravo my friend!!.....well done.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ :Ā )
WOW Tony! i am inspired by your wonderful comments and assessment! great friends like you prompt me to continue writing, your uplifting critique helps me want to improve and aspire to your level of writing! thank you, is not enough! so I would say to all my new friends here, I'm honored!
A beautiful write that puts the reader there in the moment Jim...X
hugs Marion! if only we could stay in the moment!
Beautifully written very inspiring Linda
Thank you so much Linda!
wonderful poem and song Jim
thank you bunches Greg!
Thank you bunches Shelley-anne!
This is one hell of an amazing composition Sir Jim and with the exception of that mountain lion, you may have transported me to one of my own favouwrite localĀ haunts where I often wander and do nothing but listen ....................... both liked and pinned accordingly .. N :)
Neville, your support, feedback and compliments are very much appreciated! thank you for visiting my mind warehouse that sometimes spills out words of value!
thank you Hard Parts!