Poem -
My Beautiful Coffin
Quite a site to behold, is my beautiful coffin
waiting like a limousine with its' doors wide open
content I will lay; a rich man, dressed up pretty;
Not once in my life I’ve known this kind of luxury
Red silk satin, soft velvet pillow, it's all just for me.
But, not too much room to twist around and turn over;
some people in my life may want to haunt me forever
so if I ever get spooked, it'll be hard to move my head
but still, I won’t worry, I’ll be sleeping like the dead
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So you don't want to be cremated? Hey man you want to be burried in the limousine of coffins, I say go for it doesn't really matter. Very cool write and I agree with C a different wrote for you indeed but awesome. I mean cmon that waiting with its limousine doors open line is kick ass. Peace and love.
hey Devon, cremation is fine by me, makes no difference, you are right, lol, the subject came up, what can I say, I'm random.....I went on a Mennonite farm to buy a dozen jars of maple syrup a few hours ago, and may write about the experience if I don't put myself to sleep in the process....hey the group you mentioned is very good, I do know them, cheers man, thanks for a very cool comment, my friend
Chris I know exactly what you mean...I'll sit down ready to write something at night and the next thing I know im snoring and 30 minutes have gone by lol. Glad you like them, im not obsessed but they have some good tunes. Peace!
LOL!!......you crack me up dude!!.......I can only imagine what kinda creative mood you had to be in to create this most interesting point of view........but not to worry......It'll be hard to move your head!! (smiles).........cool stuff my friend.......ALL STARS.......enjoyed the read......Love and Rockets!!......T xo
thanks T, it was an odd write....my mom is obsessing over the subject lately, I have this cousin who has payed for his coffin and plot; long time now, and he is a fairly young man, and he regularly visits the thing to enjoy the view; morbid sob, with lots of free time on his hands, lol, must be therapeutic for him, who knows, yes this is an odd subject, lol....thanks for comment....cheers my brother
Hi Christopher Great write i see the irony in it
as in we can have riches galore but when your dead your dead
hes not going to notice the room he has or see the plush furnishings of the coffin:-)
I enjoyed Best wishes Debs
hey, deborah, thanks for saying that, and you are so right about the irony, cheers
HI mate loved this one too. we are comfortable in life so why not in death lol
another good write
well penned
cheers jeff
high five! Jeff....why not indeed, lol....cheers
Stellar write Christopher!
thank you, poet D